Two big things:
- Story telling is clearly my strength so I should play into my strengths to illustrate the story.
- Eloquent, poignant word usage and plus, it’s funny
Two bad things:
- Diversify the word portfolio; I used terrible 3 times in the same sentence where any other words would’ve qualified in the sentence so long it’s not terrible.
- While observing others, be sure to include my own experience of retail; why do I work in retail?